Guneet:

It's just about okay technically, but it doesnt make sense.. the expression before he spells BODY'S, you may have got that wrong. Or am i missing the point...

Nate Lane:

awesome man. I really like it! One thing that I think you could have improved the pose after he says, "about the...uh..." (around frame 95. It just doesn't communicate very clearly. Anyways, keep it up man! defenitely nice work :D

Janarthanan:

Good attempt...andy needs better action..other two looks quiet convincing..
but the hand holding the cup..seems to saty in the same line..cud have given a better moving hold..

Eric Huelin:

Blue shirt guy should look more perplexed, setup was missing a purpose.

Mayank:

i like the story telling thing..cool work,..good luck

Gregory Naud:

Watch your arcs..specially on Ik hands;)

Mike Courtney:

the adults freeze before the animation is over

Andy Bewernick:

Nice concept, never would have though of that.

Brad Regier:

Interesting concept, but the man's response doesn't quite fit. Nice unique idea though.

Ben Hatton:

First seemed promising, but his pointing to the text was all a bit too obvious and without reason.
Facial animation didn't seem to be "strong" enough to match the dialog.

Jason Smith:

Nice original idea.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like it but I think the timing on some of the poses is a bit awkward.

Although, it does kinda add to the comedic effect, so I don't really know what to think.

Santiago Montenegro:

good but need more work

Ramesh Koruturu:

nice b;ut 1st man showing bodys that time hand movement is not good