A.J. Black:

Hi, a few critiques if I may. The middle man (guy in the suit) seems to have a off lip synch. The "bodies" line with his jaw and chin move to the right seems a little to far away from the audio. Other than that the synchs were good. Lastly, when his shoulders go up at 195 it seems like the cake should move a little more and possibly go off balance, those things are about 15 lbs. when they are that tall. Just some weight for thought. Hope that helps and good luck

Dave Poler:

Not clear what the guy running has to do with the conversation. Also, movements are still jerky for some limbs and floaty on others

Ken Rice:

Good effort - lip sync is a bit out though.

JAEHYUN PARK:

Cool!!! just you should make keys for lipsync little bit faster. The movement of lip is not following properly. Good work.

Noah Arntson:

You did a good job in making the kid a brat. The kid outside at the beginning is confusing.

Nate Lane:

Awesome man looks great! I really love the characters. One thing that I think you could maybe make a little clearer is what that person outside in the first shot is doing. It would be fine that it is just a random person running by or something, but you have your character focused on them, which makes the audience focused on them, so I think that it is important that you have whatever that person doing be very clear. Just a though :) Keep it up tho man! You've got some really nice stuff going for ya :D

Vanessa Blair:

The second character seems a little stiff, and movements of his arms, head, shoulders seem to move at the same time. Adding some extra breakdown keys might help it look a little more natural. Great job overall though!

Janarthanan:

Im sorry i dint get tha idea..
Lags in lip sync..could have madethe guy wit spectacles more intersting...other two characters are quite ok..

Caryn:

Unfortunately, I don't think this concept is very clear. I don't really get what angle you're going for here. What is the situation? What is the story behind this?

Eric Huelin:

I'd rather be outside is seems more interesting, however, I can't understand why someone is running away with a box?

Mayank:

nice work

Mike Courtney:

keep pushing it

Shannon:

The action on the first speaker is a bit wobbly and also hits the poses too hard. A bit of polish would go a long way on him--you've got some good acting choices there already. The second speaker seems pretty good, but watch the slow drift of his hands holding the cake. It doesn't feel as heavy as it should.

Marcos Borba Moreira:

i didnt understand what is happening

Ben Hatton:

Guy1 has some weird eye problems, they don't point in the same direction, and seem to slide around too much. I like the expression at F56, but they eyes kind of mess it up. If he's referring to something behind him, then I think we might need some more hints - like a nervous glance beforehand. The head nod at F30 is a bit weird.

Jason Smith:

Are those oreos on that cake!!?

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like it.

Juan Carlos Valdez:

Your animation is good, but it's moving too much. use slow ins and outs to slove that problem