What R ya spellin?
Comments:
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Mark Persson:
Great idea about the car crash, but it needs more work on it!
/Best!
Caryn:
The step forward is off. He is not shifting his center of gravity enough to the side before lifting his right leg.
Ken Rice:
I like your setup but I think you have too many competing movements happening throughout your animation. In the last part your kid and the seated guy are merging together (bad silhouette)
Willem-Jan L. van Rootselaar:
too much drifting
Noah Arntson:
I like the body falling out of the car.
Eric Huelin:
Hits: Good establishing shot, camera positions are well chosen, good facial expressions on the kid and the green guy.
Misses:The red shirt guy seems to gesture strangely while spelling, the kid frowns before the guy finishes spelling.
Nate Lane:
haha i really love the character with the car. awesome job.
Jason Smith:
Great secondary action on the kid playing with the car! Nice touch. I love the little walk going over to them.
Devin:
i think the bodies fall out a little to early, maybe wait a little longer and have him maybe glance over right before they fall out.
Mike Courtney:
the brown shirt's walk needs work
Damon Smith:
Love the dynamic poses
Ashwani:
good
James Fearn-Wannan:
All in all, I think this is alright. I'm not sure of some of the poses you've picked, though..
Janarthanan:
nice idea..but poses are not strong..tha guys walk..loks bad..










Animator: Brian Bredehoeft
Description: i was working on getting good expression out of the words. Exagerated both the facial and body poses but tried not to overdue it. Added the car in background for a little extra.
Experience: 2 years production experiance and 4 years of college.
Time taken: 20 hours