What R ya spellin?

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Animator: Brian Bredehoeft

Description: i was working on getting good expression out of the words. Exagerated both the facial and body poses but tried not to overdue it. Added the car in background for a little extra.

Experience: 2 years production experiance and 4 years of college.

Time taken: 20 hours

Comments:

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Mark Persson:

Great idea about the car crash, but it needs more work on it!

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Caryn:

The step forward is off. He is not shifting his center of gravity enough to the side before lifting his right leg.

Ken Rice:

I like your setup but I think you have too many competing movements happening throughout your animation. In the last part your kid and the seated guy are merging together (bad silhouette)

Willem-Jan L. van Rootselaar:

too much drifting

Noah Arntson:

I like the body falling out of the car.

Eric Huelin:

Hits: Good establishing shot, camera positions are well chosen, good facial expressions on the kid and the green guy.
Misses:The red shirt guy seems to gesture strangely while spelling, the kid frowns before the guy finishes spelling.

Nate Lane:

haha i really love the character with the car. awesome job.

Jason Smith:

Great secondary action on the kid playing with the car! Nice touch. I love the little walk going over to them.

Devin:

i think the bodies fall out a little to early, maybe wait a little longer and have him maybe glance over right before they fall out.

Mike Courtney:

the brown shirt's walk needs work

Damon Smith:

Love the dynamic poses

Ashwani:

good

James Fearn-Wannan:

All in all, I think this is alright. I'm not sure of some of the poses you've picked, though..

Janarthanan:

nice idea..but poses are not strong..tha guys walk..loks bad..

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