Comments:
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Hadas Rosen:
The guy's breathing is distracting me from the actual guy talking, so make sure to think about staging! The floating head could be more punchy, but you're beginning to get the accents!
Fred:
His head should follow his shoulders more, not go in the opposite direction. There is too much offset/drag. His torso would be expanding with each breath.
Animator: Stephem
Description: My participation in this month's competition is to understand what stage my level is. This is my first time to participate in this competition. I hope to learn and get some good reviews to improve my animation level. Thank you all!
Experience: About one year
Time taken: About two weeks