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Naive visitor

by nabiran kim, March Competition Winner!

Final Rating: 7.86. Finished 1 out of 139 entries.

247,873 views including the voting period.

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Animator: nabiran kim

Description: One day, naive man visit men's house.
but he's not pleased....

Experience: 10days

Time taken: 4years

Comments:

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Frank J. Warsinski:

This is my 1st time ever to vote on an animation. I'm not an experienced animator (or even any kind of animator, for that matter), but I'm not really finding anything wrong with this. I don't want to give it eleven stars right off the bat, though, because I just don't know. I might come back at the end of judging to see if my vote has changed.

Update:
My vote here didn't change. I like the differences in movement of the two, but maybe the lanky guy could be influenced by gravity just a hair more (his backpack looks like it could be heavy), and ever so slightly less staccato movement.

Eleftherios Kokkinakis:

You have some really nice poses but a lot of them are redundant. You should keep only the ones necessary to communicate what you want otherwise the viewer will get confused/

jan:

Epic one!!

Jordan Barg:

Love it, lip sync feels a little late throughout

Zach Savaglio:

Very nice!

Peter Dang:

nice appeal. top 2

sattwik biswas:

nice animation. but i think the end can be better.

Niko Frenkenberger:

great timing, especially love how you can really feel the weight difference between those two

Fernando Incetta:

Awesome, solid animation. I got nothing to add except congratulations.

Watcharatep Dokmai:

winner

Lina Zhutautaite:

Great job! Needs more work on lip synch!

Nicholas McCamish:

Loved it!