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Animator: Eleftherios Kokkinakis

Description: When Superman is approached by a fan boy who wants to become a super hero!

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 2 weeks mostly afternoons

Comments:

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Jesse Smith:

Good work.. nice setup, lighting and animation.

Ryan Hill:

Awesome animation! My comments relate to maintaining the characters weight & balance.

Frame 50-60, the Super fan appears to slide his left foot. It's preferable to always lift the foot when making a balance adjustment like this. Sometime during the animation, the boy appears to lean to far forward, to the point of falling over.

Also, when Superman turns around with his left leg starting at frame 75, he should then support his weight more on his right leg at frame 85. Followed up by lifting his right foot forward and planting it at frame 98.

Otherwise, great poses and acting by these characters.

:

I guess this is my favorite for this month. I like the idea, the acting and the animation. :) great work!
the handpose of superman around frame 108 is a bit flat almost defeault?

Fernando Incetta:

Very good! The acting choices for the skinny guy work great for the voice line. I would exaggerate his lip sync more, his face is not showing the same energy as the rest of his body.

AttilaB:

Good acting choices!
I can not see the physical contact when the little guy pokes superman.

Raevynne 'Mei' Vile:

Great timing, staging, and arcs! When the young guy does the superman pose, he upstages superman. Maybe add some more hand and head movement to superman during that.

Tasha Howe:

Really love that Superman is preoccupied with scouting the area, justifies the irritation in his voice + believability. Awesome job, perhaps some of the poses could have been pushed a bit more to provide even more contrast between the 2