Lea:

Your poses aren't too bad, and you've got some nice expressions here, but it feels unfinished and rather rough at this stage. It also looks a little unnatural, like you could benefit from using more real-life reference for some of the movements.

PRIYA RANJAN DEB:

Try to give one or two major action and rest merge with subtle acting. Rest is good.

Lia:

Looks like if two differents persons animate each character, the orange one seems stayed in blocking

Andy David Barnthouse:

a bit choppy