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Are you up to something?

by Paul Boogaards

Final Rating: 3.46. Finished 141 out of 195 entries.

427 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Paul Boogaards

Description: A co-worker over hears something he shouldn't have.

Experience: 5 years of school

Time taken: a week and a half

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Laurie Bick:

Frame 9, the left character is not quite right, the balance of carrying a heavy box would not support the figure. The walking motion though looks nice.

Poses for the right character are inconsistent between frames 57/58.

The camera snap from 57/58 is also distracting.

Prior to frame 58, some joints seem backwards to me.