Final Rating: 5.51. Finished 27 out of 310 entries.

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Animator: Vahram

Description: The girl and her aunt are invited to the wedding party.

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 10 days

Comments:

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Andrei:

The background in the first scene is too even, try placing the objects (trees and the tables) in a random position so that it will look a bit more interesting to look at. :)

Marcella D.:

Not bad.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Quite there. Fitting. There is something lacking, but I can hardly say what... maybe it lacks... depth? A little bit more complexity? Anyway, it feels appropriate enough, but it could be more...

Ariyanto Zulkifli:

really nice. top 10.

Rakesh Modi:

Acting choices are nice. The staging/framing of the shots could have been better. Current compositions are not helping the performance to reach the audience effectively.