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"Is There Alcohol In This?"

by Alex E.

Final Rating: 5.29. Finished 37 out of 310 entries.

599 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Alex E.

Description: A concerned mother takes control over her alcohol-savy daughter.

Animated by Alexander Emenheiser (aka Alex E.) using Toon Boom Harmony 12 Essentials.

Experience: About 4 3/4 years of total experience in animation.

Time taken: Nearly three days, totaling around eleven hours.

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Sabrina Winkel:

There's random pop ups by the mom and random camera changes

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Kudos for full inking/coloring. Like the first part, although the second half feels a bit cheap and could use the same amount of effort.

Steve Schwartz:

Great expressions, great movement and the laugh in the stand alone frame was hilarious. I would tighten up the lip sync at the beginning, especially at the end of words like "this" and "no". Great work! (but why the border around the frame?)

Marcella D.:

I can definitely see this on someone's You-tube channel.

Jordan Lewers:

It was going so well, but the still image from frames 138-159 throws the animation off! That may have been due to time constraints, though

Fernando Incetta:

Great style! It could use some more in-betweens though. Good job

Monica Stringer:

could use some animation during the laugh, the still image kind of brings me out of the story