Gaucelm De Villaret:

Stiff positions, low level of expression... Jittering does not equal expression.

Deanna Keogh:

Just visuals - but maybe adding some contrast would help make the characters stand out... this is very flat

Marcella D.:

I understand that you are trying to do something unique with this whole 3D set, but try to finish the whole thing.

Richard Adams:

Bit hard to see, but the animation is very good. The passing truck in the background is perhaps too distracting.

Zachary:

The animation of the mouth is good, but I am unable to see what is going on in this.