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Another day on the job

by Shawn Kelly

Final Rating: 3.75. Finished 128 out of 228 entries.

333 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Shawn Kelly

Description: frustrated boss, gets upset at employee.

Experience: about 3 months

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Connor Leuck:

He doesn't blink. He also needs eye darts or something to keep his eyes moving. They are staying still while his head is moving.

Jean-Guy MacLeod:

Giving the girl a little bit of life would have helped this a lot.

Yuri Marcel Vieira:

i don't get why it looks like he gets angry before asking about indonesia

roy cobn:

is he talking to a statue?

Chris Burel:

His eyes stay focused on the same spot for the entire shot, and it is really distracting.

David O. Diaz:

I see one guy talking, then one girl talking, and then same guy cutting off same girl. I'm assuming he meant to be rude? I'd flush out the story a little more. Also his focused eyes feels weird. Body animation is nice and smooth.

Erich Hess:

Should have just had him talking to an off camera character, not to a statue. Also, have him turn more when talking to someone else, it looks like he is talking to the same person.