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Borislav Dimitrov:
first think that catches my eye was the hands of the girl.. it looks like you havent touchet the fingers.. doesnt look alive, its imposible to keep your hands straight like you did here, they need to be way more relaxed and bend. also the camera angle on the second cut is not working quite well, if you move it a little to screen right and then rotate so we can se a little more of the girl's face, that way the silohetes might be much better.
also we se only legs at the end which are not moving at all. after all she is a person so to make her more alive do some weight shift , some slight movements. even if we see only legs....
Erich Hess:
With all that gesturing with the pencil his fingers are frozen. Does he have a prosthetic hand?
Animator: Nassim Briedj
Description: A young researcher offers a student to ask questions, but in the end he is not at all focus with her ...
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 8 days