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First Day On the Job

by Brian Beck

Final Rating: 4.57. Finished 60 out of 228 entries.

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Animator: Brian Beck

Description: It's Maggie's first day at a new company. Her new boss, Jim, is giving her the usual rundown. Problem is, Jim is focused on an important business deal.

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 1 day of pre-production, One week of animation

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Connor Leuck:

Literally pushing her head while shutting her mouth seems a bit too much for your guy character. After being treated like that, you might transition to her angry face much faster.

Erich Hess:

Zoom in and frame them better. Nothing is happening in the left of the screen and their legs aren't doing anything important.