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Teacher loses the plot.

by Penny S

Final Rating: 3.68. Finished 138 out of 228 entries.

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Animator: Penny S

Description: This is my first go at animating. Would really appreciate some constructive criticism.

I'm aware the rendering/lighting/texturing isn't great. Also not sure if I encoded it correctly!

Experience: none

Time taken: 10 days

Comments:

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Johnny:

It looks blurry, but other than that good job

Yev Rotar:

The man is a little stiff at times.

ben malberg:

Nice concept, and I like her posing at the end. Interesting relationship between the characters. Mechanically, I would take some time to make sure the body is balanced at all times from all angles while posing them out. There was a couple times where the guy looked off the center of balance. (f45, f70)

Borislav Dimitrov:

i see the idea, but the body mechanics are not working at all.. (weigh shift, timing, spacing, etc.)
try to practice them more.

Erich Hess:

Looks like his legs are locked out when walking, which makes his knees pop a bit. The lean back on "math" looks like he should fall over, the balance is off