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1000 Percent Indonesia

by Cam Stark

Final Rating: 3.93. Finished 100 out of 228 entries.

332 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Cam Stark

Description: Joolya Leweez Dryfuss makes a funny and we laugh


Bonnie by Josh Sobel
Roboter by Niklas Wennersten on Creative Crash
Norman by Pixar peeps
Background stuff from Google Warehouse

Experience: A bit

Time taken: Some time

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Connor Leuck:

He's very jumpy; perhaps add more slow in/slow out.

I like her reaction expression though. And ending expression.

ben malberg:

I think you have a good start on this. I would remove some of the movement from the man because it feels too rushed. For example the seat adjustment at f56 felt unnecessary. I can see you put a lot of time into the concept and set, I like the futuristic theme.

Borislav Dimitrov:

are those lego toys? all the movements of the guy and the girl are like robots, i can clearly see the hands of the guy are IK, also there are tons of twined poses of the hands..

Erich Hess:

transitions between poses. Need them.