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Still Waiting For Indonesia...

by Jonathan Lau

Final Rating: 3.81. Finished 121 out of 228 entries.

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Animator: Jonathan Lau

Description: Took me half a week to think it out and rest of two weeks to animate.

Experience: Roughly 1 year

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Connor Leuck:

He's standing quite far away to be talking to someone so intently. Move him closer so that when he moves away, it's more readable.

Your second guy's walk cycle is sliding. He could probably stop just past her shoulder.

ben malberg:

It's funny. I would try to add some more overlapping movement, for example in the head shake, try to get the shoulders and body involved in the movement.

roy cobn:

the males characters are floating.