Final Rating: 4.31. Finished 72 out of 228 entries.

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Animator: Hassam Dueñas

Description: A man who tries to flirt a girl, but fails.


-My first animated dialogue.

Experience: one year

Time taken: two and a half weeks

Comments:

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ben malberg:

I like your idea for the character of the guy, he really seems annoying with all his fidgeting. Around f123 the girl is kind of echoing his movement, and I felt it doesn't suit her character as much. They felt too much a like. The newspapers arc is rough around f200. I liked his ending pose.

Léo Miche:

This is quite good!
The characters are moving a lot. I'd say too much.
When a character needs our attention, bring him to life and shut the other down. A two character scene is a ping pong play : there is only one ball, the players can only play one after another.

Erich Hess:

need balance in body movements.