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A little bit too much...

by Alex Mlqd

Final Rating: 6.51. Finished 14 out of 228 entries.

1,249 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Alex Mlqd

Description: The man tries to impress the girl by his charisma and the dialog.
She's impressed and she doesn't know really what to say.
But she shows a little bit too much hes feelings and he's disappointed about her.

Experience: 3 months on a TV shows.

Time taken: 5 days to thinking about it, 17 days to animate it, 2 days to render it.

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Josh C:

Good! I like the acting a lot, although I can't understand the treatment of the "Indonesia" line.

Nassim Briedj:

good one but we don't see the react of the women at the end, i guess its suitable

salman siavashi:

nice

Borislav Dimitrov:

something i se in nearly 60 shot like this one is the guy turning back pretending like he is asking someone if they heard of indonesia... and i can say its not woking. it will be much better if you use some kind of a prop to sell the idea of him talking to someone.

David O. Diaz:

The girl's "wow" pose is weakened by the large body movements in the rest of her line. She thrusts forward on wow, shakes her head, shifts weight, grabs glasses, etc. Removing just one of the actions would give more time to showcase all the other poses. Guy's posing is crisp and authentic.

Raghav Nagpal:

Initially second character is dead while Malcom is in focus. Other wise it nice animation.