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Heard From Indonesia ?

by Josse Ngaibona

Final Rating: 4.87. Finished 50 out of 228 entries.

429 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Josse Ngaibona

Description: Just a man who's trying to do too many things at the same time .

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Yuri Marcel Vieira:

Tom eyes doesnt seems to be looking at some point especifically, at least when he bumps in to Mery, he should have glanced at her

Brian Beck:

Good. Just need some moving holds for the guy. He just feels like he's floating around too much. He also needs some more exaggerated poses.

Alec Farai Munhapa:

the render looks alright dont know the animation :/

Jez:

Is he sliding & bumping in her. Doesn't look good.

Tobias:

Spend more time on animation, less time on rendering and texturing etc.

ben malberg:

I would work on the floatyness of her arm around f209 and his hand at 260. The spin was nice, and a good idea. It felt a little too fast, maybe by 2 or 3 frames. Nice render but the shadow on his face at the end makes it hard to see his speaking.

ben:

Nice render and environment

Joe Levand:

This is pretty! I love her swing around him around frame 74. The only thing I see is that the girls hands feel a bit stiff at points. Well done though, really well done!

Erich Hess:

so blurry!