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I want get your attention

by zhi shen

Final Rating: 3.84. Finished 115 out of 228 entries.

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Animator: zhi shen

Description: MY final

Experience: student

Time taken: 3 week on and off

Comments:

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Josh C:

Pretty well animated. I like that you took the "guy hitting on girl" take for this particular audio clip, but I wish you'd done something more with the "Indonesia" line from a performance and story standpoint. It doesn't fit in with his character (considering he's someone so forward as to push against the wall) to do a complete 180 to disinterest with "Indonesia." Maybe he's an Indonesian activist that hooks her first with his charm before signing her up to his cause, or maybe she's got a more attractive friend named Indonesia he's trying to get to. I'm really looking for a better treatment of that line than just a throwaway.

Connor Leuck:

I like that he seems drunk. The movements are very sluggish; in a good way. And the fact that she seems oblivious to it somehow makes it better.

Her movement to the wall though is a bit fast.