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A Meeting with President Kelly

by Ethan Yazel

Final Rating: 5.44. Finished 27 out of 228 entries.

600 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Ethan Yazel

Description: A workaholic dad tries to connect with his ambitious daughter

Experience: 2 Years

Time taken: The Month

Comments:

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kristin:

I like your style a lot (:

Connor Leuck:

The contours on the teacups are a bit thin, making it hard to see the animation on them.

Before the "Scuse me one moment" action, there should be an anticipatory action hinting to the viewer that a bigger action is about to happen.

The girl blinks, but the man does not.

The arm move from 178-185 is drastic. The elbow actually goes back and forth which I think is what is making it so big of a movement.