Final Rating: 5.43. Finished 38 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Tapon Roy

Description: ..........

Experience: 3 yrs

Time taken: one week

Comments:

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Cameron:

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think the Heavy is copyrighted.

Eric Balistrieri:

Try to watch your twinning.

Daniel Hollister:

Animation is good, but i feel the composition of the shot with the camera could be improved upon.

syrus johnson:

the rig in the back bad on everything in a bad rig for a line like this

Adam Singer:

Nice work :) One thought I had was that the characters would probably seem to fit better if their roles were reversed (big guy asks "why?") Not much help now I know, but maybe a good thing to consider next time :) Keep it up!

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:

Front guy should have turn back to face the character behind..

Craig P. Smith:

Animation looks very smooth, but there's a lot of twinning of the arms of the man on the railing (both arms doing the same thing at the same time). You should either vary the timing, or the poses.
Also, it's difficult to see the guy with the gun when he's talking, and the pose doesn't completely sell it on it's own. Maybe you should adjust the scene composition a little.
The texturing, and lighting are spectacular.

Arif Rao:

nice

Luke Bridger:

this is supposed to be animation competition not a rendering competition!! also background character seems to have no translate y on the hips

Jaime Colque:

good job, I like the scene

Wolfgang Haas:

Symmetry isn't a bad thing per se, but if nearly all poses are symmetrical, it is.