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Don't Cross the Streams

by Sean McDonald

Final Rating: 3.44. Finished 136 out of 169 entries.

17 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Sean McDonald

Description: My first 11second entry! Dedicated to the memory of the great Harold Ramis.

Experience: beginner

Time taken: 4 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jirair Garabedian:

Mouth shapes need work

Zoe Piel:

Kind of mushy

Craig P. Smith:

Movements look sluggish and slow. It makes it look less natural. If they are on high alert, their overall body motions may be slow, but their eye darts, and maybe head movements would be quicker. Don't be afraid if quick movement.

Jon Coppock:

Lip sync not well defined.

Stafford Ahartz:

Lip sync is off by a few frames.

Héctor:

The hands are floating. they are so static

Brendan Kearney:

you need hold frames

April Slocombe:

Lip sync needs more work but I like the idea of the men holding their guns and the movement is minimal yet smooth.