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sadboys playing computer game's.

by ChunYong Chong

Final Rating: 5.70. Finished 29 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: ChunYong Chong

Description: computer guy name's aa, he is so stupig and he thoght he had it

Experience: 2 years+

Time taken: 10 days

Comments:

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Cameron:

Right character's movements don't match what he is supposedly saying

Zoe Piel:

Too many hand cliches. They don't add anything and are distracting from an otherwise good performance.

Casey Colledge:

It might help if there were about 40 empty cans of red bull next to red shirt. He seems pretty wired.

Derek Stewart:

Some cool poses in this, but they don't really make sense for the shot. Keep working at it though as I see some nice ideas.

Shark Bait:

It was alright until the animation went too over the top

Yuri Marcel Vieira:

good one, but the last expression of the character in the red shirt breaks the lip sync

Matthew Kenyon:

Try moving like the red character does and speaking the line.

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:

I dont understand the concept..

Craig P. Smith:

Yikes. The guy in the red shirt goes through 4 wacky poses/expressions in a second or two. I love the expressions, but it seems a bit too scattered and rushed. It looks like even a cartoon wouldn't do that.
Otherwise your command of animation and lip-syncing seems to be really good.

Douglas Fletcher:

First half is good, poses at the end let it down

April Slocombe:

Good animation for the most part. The only issues are the man in the red top smiling when I don't think he should be and his movements during his last line are excessive but he also pulls a funny face.

Wolfgang Haas:

looks great, but your characters don't actually have to act out everything they're saying