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Dont Cross the Streams

by Dominic Lutz

Final Rating: 4.05. Finished 104 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Dominic Lutz

Description: My entry for the march competition.. unfortunately I couldnt finish it yet.. but I will. Just wanted to get some feedback if possible. Its the first time I enter here.

Experience: Student, 1 year

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

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Cameron:

Is this frame-by-frame? Strange how right character is very jerky and left one is smooth.

Nasser Mohammed:

what is going on in this piece?

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:

Is the guy with the blue shirt suppose to have blocky action?

Stafford Ahartz:

Really impressive blocking, although char in blue's timing seems a bit off in the ending dialogue.

:

would be nice finished up

Trefle:

Not finished, but is about to be awesome ! Hope you are finalizing it

Lance Erickson:

Looks like the blue guy was animated in stop motion, or hold type key frames.

Britt:

the blue character looks like his animation is in step mode. You can use the graph editor to smooth the curves and his motion will be smooth, just like your guy in red! (windows>animation>graph editor)
:)