Final Rating: 6.27. Finished 10 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Gero M

Description: The punishment of cynical man

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

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Cameron:

Ending is hilarious but the whole clip is a bit long. Great sync and character animation.

Davit Martirosyan:

Nice idea, but too long i think. and also one thing: your characters doesn't blinking at all, WHY?

Jirair Garabedian:

Mouth shapes are lacking accents. It's kind of like theyve had those anasthetic shots at the dentist office, and are trying to talk to each other.

Eric Balistrieri:

I really enjoyed the concept here and much of the movement is great. I think if you made another facial pass this could really be excellent. Sometimes you seem to overact with the mouth, or miss important mouth shapes for the lip sync to read better. I love the bit at the end and the reaction, keep up the good work!

Jeff Woodward:

Great gestures, wonderful flow, work on the lip sync some more :)

Casey Colledge:

I really like frames 360 to like 440. The subtle shake of his head and shrug of the shoulders looks really natural and nice. I think this will be in the top.

Derek Stewart:

Good idea. Lip sync needs plenty of polish, but I'm liking the acting. Keep at it!

Jaime Colque:

oh my god! hahaha, it really is one of the best jobs I've seen.

Ruth Agada:

That run at the end is soo hilarious!

Jan Abero:

XD...I didn't see that coming.

Armando:

Croc' attack was the best part of this...

Janice Liu:

omg I love that run at the end!! very nice job on that and the facial expressions too

Caelan:

Very very good acting, animation, and body mechanics. I wouldn't be suprised if you are an animation mentor alumni. The lip synching is also very good with some minor flaws.

The lips at 182 when he says "What" Are to exagerated, and it looks like for one frame they are duck lipping,
Also the Mouth movement of 255 look a bit unnatural for the voice in the sound file.

At around 248 when he says good, the mouth moves unnatural

Sorry to make all these little critiques it looks like your poured your heart and soul into this scene. It was just such a good animation it bugged me to see the little unnatural things that dissuspended my disbelief. 9/10

Luke Morin:

The pauses were too long. Nice acting though.

Blond:

Haha nice one! I dont like all the necessary arm movement starting at 315 but i do like the ending.