Final Rating: 4.70. Finished 71 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Nabil Sahih

Description: A warned friend his warned camarade.un man is worth two

Experience: No experience

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Garrett:

Really cool idea! I love the beginning where the man is putting the silencer on. I think the character on the right could've been paid a little more attention (I'm not sure what he's doing or what his intentions are in the scene).

I think messing with the framing more would've allowed more clear silhouettes.

April Slocombe:

Good lip sync, animation and poses throughout.

Jan Abero:

You'll need more poses for both characters to convey that one is preparing for something while the other is really exhausted.

hamid:

left guy looks very stiff also change in poses are not enought

Caelan:

Great environment, and great character animation , I just wish there was a bit more story or at least emphasis on the story. I see the guy is holding a gun and he's probably about to do something he shouldn't while the second character is warning him. Thats all good , I personally feel like some more camera angles to really emphasize what's going on would really improved the shot. Other than that you are a spectacular character animator. Good job!