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A minute for your "Troughs"..

by Jan Abero

Final Rating: 2.69. Finished 154 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Jan Abero

Description: Just two guys in the bathroom having casual conversation. What's wrong with that?

Experience: Between 2-3 Years of experience.

Time taken: About 2-3 weeks.

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Cameron:

The color is distracting. Characters need a lot of work.

Jan Abero:

Horrible, Awful, You are Need to work on your shoulders. You should work on your overlapping actions. You need to work on your expressions more.

Caelan:

Lacks fundamentals

April Slocombe:

A few choppy, fast and floaty movements and also I don't understand why it keeps changing from colour to black and white. Mind you I like the squash and stretch on the man on the right when he says, "Don't cross the streams."

Jaime Colque:

I like the gestures