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Man That Cried "Streams!"

by Audrey Everett

Final Rating: 3.70. Finished 119 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Audrey Everett

Description: Norman is taking a shortcut through the jungle with only, a lantern and a screen device that helps him to keep in contact with his pal from afar.

Experience: A year and a half.

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Brian Heath:

kinda fun idea

Jan Abero:

I'm seeing a bit floating in your animations. Again, watch your timing and spacing. Sometimes that is the biggest culprit of why your animation will sorta float there and not feel natural to sensation of no gravity or friction or no weight.

Caelan:

You got your poses down, but you need to do some follow through and overlapping , aswell as some more breakdown poses before the animation can be polished.

Britt:

you used the tongue control for the "th" sound!! Hooray! Most people miss this. It could probably be toned down slightly, but good work.

April Slocombe:

Part of the sound clip is cut off at the beginning and the main man's movements, particularly during his last line, bears some mechanical movement. Other than that, the poses and lip sync are good and I liked seeing the other man on the tiny screen.