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Don't Cross the Stream(er)s

by Cameron

Final Rating: 3.70. Finished 119 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Cameron

Description: Two ribbon dancers have a difference of opinion.

Experience: 6 months

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Cameron:

Running character needs work

Nasser Mohammed:

good job but keep it interesting.

Stafford Ahartz:

Ideas are there, but the timing is what kills it.

Jan Abero:

I love the motions and fluidity, but I think what bothers me the most that the big bulkier character would be that fluid. Either way keep it up.

April Slocombe:

Could the streams refer to their red streamers? Also the fair-haired man's mouth could move more when he says, "I'm fuzzy." Other than that, the rest of the lip sync is good while the poses and animation in general are exceptional.

Britt:

This is just personal complaint, but i was distracted by the ribbon. the whole time i wondered if you were using a ribbon IK spine rig or cloth. either way, if it is something that doesn't add directly to your animation, be wary of including it in a portfolio piece. let your real animation work shine!