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Misinformed Stake out

by Adil Khanna

Final Rating: 6.04. Finished 13 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Adil Khanna

Description: Army guy is scoping out the hostile territory not aware that his men are being led straight into a trap because a soldier in his unit forgot to warn him.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 10 days

Comments:

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Cameron:

Wow, excellent body movement. Lipsynch could use a little work but overall very good.

Davit Martirosyan:

animation is normal, but i thinks the sound line is not according to your characters at all

Craig P. Smith:

Very nice animation, expressions and lip-syncing. There's still a bit of stiffness to them both though.

Caelan:

Wow this shot was quite amazing. Very very very very good body mechanics and natural acting. I felt the characters were believable beings. I just wish the shot had lighting, to make the aestetics a little less boring. Honestly the animation is perfect just the way it is, I Just wish the visuals where more appealing to look at. This good of an animation deserves a little lighting. I rated 11/11

Aloke Sarkar:

acting is very good especially the body language of the thin character....you just have to pay attention to the Body mechanics for eg the character does not settles properly after he comes to stop from the run. and the last camera could have been a Over the Shoulder shot

Blond:

Aamazing job. Just watch out ofr the lip sync.

Meg j:

nice body expressions

Isai Calderon III:

The animation is fantastic, but the camera cuts and angles need improvement. Remember to keep the car placement consistent in the shots.

April Slocombe:

Could the streams be in the sky? Other than that obscurity, the poses and movements are subtle and the lip sync is great.