Final Rating: 5.74. Finished 28 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Reshuka Parihar

Description: A Friend is waring of the dangers in the further journey.

Experience: Little bit.

Time taken: 2 weeks.

Comments:

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Jon Coppock:

More overlap, things happening all at once on the poses. Lacks follow through and secondary action.

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:

The guy's hand movement on "Don't cross the stream" part is too snappy..

Craig P. Smith:

On the first line with the blue man, and the last line of the green man, you have them make a gesture when their hands are right in front of their faces. It seems like you could easily just move the arm so the gesture happens of the the side. Makes a better silhouette.