Final Rating: 3.74. Finished 116 out of 169 entries.

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Animator: Daniel Roldan

Description: A Gangster telling his boss what to do.

Experience: 2 years currently in school

Time taken: 5 Days

Comments:

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Garrett:

I think this piece would've benefited from more acting choices. Doesn't have to be crazy but it just felt a little stiff. I like the mood you created though!

Craig P. Smith:

Aside from the lips looking like they only have an open closed option, you don't have enough poses, or they don't change enough. There's a little emphasis change with the seated man at the end, but still, there's not enough visual change/emphasis to fully punch the dialogue.

Brian Rusnak:

Hey there! I feel that your staging and camera work really helped your story. I also like the minimal movements of your characters. Try mixing up your poses slightly (character in chair moves around a little more), to push this even further. Good job!

Jaime Colque:

good work, sure it goes to the top

Kristin Turnipseed:

Both characters feel too stiff, could use some moving holds

Blond:

Very stiff overall..