Romain Digonnet:

The animation principles are there. Too many poses, and the action is too fast compared to the sound.

Ethan Reitz:

like the cartooney motion and the poses and weight are convincing

Sylvain Bernard:

A bit to many pose changes, and animation need more refinement in general. I really like your idea when he says "...I can't..."

Justin Lashley:

Technically , this looks pretty good, but the action seems way too fast and snappy for such a melodramatic sounding delivery.

J K:

Motion was a little too fast...

Rory:

lip synch not quite there. over-exaggerated movement makes him move very fast. great animation though

Steve C:

You've got some nice stuff in there, try not to overact it though. It's moving very broadly and quickly for this subtle piece of dialogue. Good work.

Lianna Scrimger:

watch out for those crazy moom hands

Sergey B.:

Nice animation :D

James Maloney:

slow down. to much movement in too little time.

Brad Bradbury:

You really don't need all those poses for every word. 'huge section' is way out of control. Keep it simple.

Nino:

Cool ideas. I think theres a little too much fast movements with the gestures.

Ryan Lowe:

Too looney tooney for the clip it seems. Too much start/stop motion.

Adele K Thomas:

this is a little too jumpy, i can see that maybe it was because he might be boozed up, but it needs softening

Tommy:

really fast.. but not too bad

BrunoDestefani:

The poses are very nice, but the movements are too broad.

Traci Plagmann:

I like that the timing is snappy on this and not even at all. The gestures seem a little fast at times to me though.

Avner Engel:

Nice work mate

Nick Hales:

It's a nice piece, but he seems to hit the same poses too many times. So end up getting a bit of a deja vu feeling

Kent Wong:

too much hand gestures and too sudden change of key poses. Very distracting i guess. But you have ur style. not too bad after all.

Sajjad Afzal:

Empressive. very nice animation

Florent Perrin:

think your transitions are too speed! try to calm it down...

Freddy Burgos:

Really like the pause on "I can't.." Feels a bit busy overall though, like you're hitting a lot of poses.

Justin Weg:

too much movement

Nate Lane:

It's sorta all over the place. You need to probably cut out some of your major poses, and just focus on the ones where the sound track emphasis the words. Otherwise I think this is a great effort! keep it up man!

Yahya:

Good work. just a bit too snappy or fast movements. if it was slowed down by a tiny bit, it would be fantastic. Keep it up mate.

Anandaroop Mukherjee:

great man

chrisbyk:

Really nice. A few suggestions though, I think it s a bit too snappy.
I also find your left hand poses a bit weird at 250-274. Keep the good work

yoozco:

what can i say...too nervous for me :)
looks like he has got ADHD or something :) overall head (mouth and eyes) seems good, but rest of body is too nervous - too much poses, too much waves, simply bad timing.

Erik Westlund:

Nice simple composition with great silhouette value. Most animators here seem to have trouble getting energy into their performances. Not you. Still a little hyper active in the performance, you need to balance the amount of movement and energy with subtle movements.

Maya K:

The expressions feel nice. There may be too many poses here. You could really pace out the timing if you highlighted a few of them and maybe dropped the others.

Matthew Chan:

Pose on 26 and 120 are really similar, try varying the poses a bit more.

Marcio Bukowski:

Funny movements. Funny poses.
I like it. Lipsynch is not so good as the rest of animation

Brian Brotherston:

Too much going on in the middle. Too many gestures. I like to watch it though. I like your animation style.

Arindam:

good
But it's too much snappy--------
remember that the whole things should not b snappy------
In between u ve 2 use subtle actions too-------
the action After "Huge section of my music" is unnessesary-----

habib asim bircan:

try to concantrate less poses. it makes your poses readable. I catch some good poses in your animation but as I said before it loose efects because of fast movements. your character makes to many thinks and miss the target.

Luc Degardin:

Hehe! I really enjoyed the part where he hesitates ("can't rewrite"). There's way too much poses for me. No need to hit every word, it makes him too spped and almost nervous, where he should be concerned and depressed by the director's comments.

André Moreira Forni:

I find it a bit too exagerated some times, but has nice poses :)

Sunny Kharbanda:

Simplify!

Rob Wilson:

a little too frantic. he is all over the place. I would focus on a few really strong poses and work around them. this looks like you wanted to hit a ton of poses when if you tried for fewer and matched them with the beat of the audio i think you would have a stronger piece.

Marcus Tee:

Really snappy and hyperactive.

Could have tried a different pose for the second "Sigh".