Arindam:

good

Julien Abenhaim:

great job, love the emotion

eejun:

Smooth animation and i like the ending gesture. Super Awesome

Tony Mecca:

Really nice poses

James Wilson:

the pose at the begining just after he says "unbeleavable" look of balance. his COG need to be pulled back a bit

Lianna Scrimger:

Very nice piece, I like the carefully controlled finger/hand poses. This character is a pain in the butt to deal with :) The only part that lost me, lip sync wise was how you opened the mouth right after 'perfect' it looks a little like he's saying 'perfectUH'

Steve C:

Really nice performance and good camera cuts.

Sergey B.:

:D

Arek Firlit:

cool, maybe too many different camera angles, but acting is really interesting, congrats

Gregory Marlow:

looks very good. Maybe too many camera changes.

Tommy:

I realy like everything about yours. nice work. maybe a little better timing with the lip syncing. overall its great

Rushikesh Joshi:

good try there buddy,just you need to keep action beat slow,becase dilaog mood is no energetic. and also at last fingers are moving lot again and again

Louis Ng:

The cut to the mid close up of him doesn't seem motivated. It would have been better to stick to the mid-shot right after going to the long shot.

danni abram:

the word perfect at the end doesnt seem quite right, I like the piece overall although the choice of camera changes is a little distracting I thought.

Kent Wong:

good facial expression there. Nice acting too. N nice smooth animation. But too much camera movement n cut scene, which distract a lot. Overall Great job. You will be in the winner list. =)

BrunoDestefani:

Excelent animation...but the scene is too dark, and the third cut is somewhat unnecessary

Justin Weg:

great animation. I don't think you needed more than 1 camera cut though.

Jason Par:

nice acting. Camera cuts are confusing

Johnathan Scoon:

arguably the best facial animation this round. great work

James Jones Jr:

great animation... way too many cuts

Jeranimo:

Great work!

Ken Rice:

nice - you get a good feeling of angst here.

Maya K:

This is looking really nice! The acting is believable and the timing on the throw of the trash is awesome. The camera cuts feels pretty good as well, even though they are a little quick. This is real good! Nice job!

Gabriel:

The animation of his hand at the end are very good, it makes him look like a magician

Richard Bannister:

This is a lovely piece but it gets lost at the end with "rewrite whats perfect" and the final pose/face isnt selling it. I think he should be more desperate. Its like you tried to squeeze the last lot into that pose as well and the timing is rushed. I hope you win though because this is the best by a mile!

Good luck

prashant rawal:

nice!! pretty lively...i simply loved the rewrite part

kimleow:

awesome. love it when he threw of the paper. :)

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

I like it !
His gestures are really credible and artist-like.
Maybe he shouldn't show his back that much when he turns..
And the cut after "music" is not necessary I think ;)

Cuby:

Animation looks really good, and the composition is nice too... I find all the camera cuts very distracting though, and just make it confusing to watch... There's far too many of them.

Other than that though I really liked it.

André Moreira Forni:

Wow, nice work man, i like how you hit some accents like in "section" and "rewrite". My only comments is that the last poses are not as strong as the rest of the animation.

Awesome.

Virgil Tanasa:

very good, minor problems, as some unbalanced poses and maybe the lipsync could be better, also in my oppinion you don't need the camera cuts.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Good effort! Watch his balance in the pose around frame 42. Also, reducing the number of camera cuts by 1 or 2 would help.

Brad Bradbury:

Great work!! Nicely done!!

jonathan fontaine:

yeah ! this is great
there is just a lipsync bug just after he said "I can't "

Daniel Harris:

Heya! This is great! I love your polish, nice arcs and great fluid movements. If I had to make a comment, It would be that I would like to see some longers holds, especially in areas where he should really be thinking. I think the third camera cut is one too many for a sequence this long as well. I would suggest removing your third camera and giving that animation to Camera 4.

Top notch stuff :-)

Erik Westlund:

Nice, smooth finish, with some weight in the movement. Camera cuts in staging are interesting controlling focus and keeping the performance quite alive and active. Dark background is hiding character silhouette.

Nico:

Wow, nice nice stuff. Really captured a kind of arrogance I haven't seen in too many this month. Everything just hits really well. Good job.