Ethan Reitz:

some really cool animation and poses, timing .. lip sync is a little off

Scott Marshall:

Very good overall movement, but the lip sync still needs polish/timing changes.

gerardo:

very good facil expressions

Troy Milhoan:

nice facial

Brad Regier:

I bet i know who did this!
I love your style. Good stuff.
bR

Kensaba:

I miss some lipsinc at "torn up huge seccion of..." , but it’s very well done. Good luck!

Jim Bradrick:

Really good effort! I would raise the camera viewpoint slightly, though, so we aren't seeing the tabletop edge-on.

Marco Palmieri:

would have been nicer if the camera angle showed the top of the table. motion is good.

J Shaw:

I thought this could have been great!!!! if oyu only used two poses, the first one anf then the one when he's on the table looking to his left. those are great poses that were all you needed.
Cheers

Lucio Mennillo:

Animation is very good but the lip sync needs some word!

Patrick Chin:

nice attitudes, but feels bit 'overanimated'. To me, his emotions are getting lost in all the movement.

Gideon Caspi:

Really nice acting, would be nice if the camera was positioned more to the right ( so he's on the left rather than centre-frame) to see what or who he's interacting with.

Florent Perrin:

Very subtle, very touchy, great job

Kent Wong:

nice effort! more heavy and strong poses will make it perfect. The overall frustration in the expression doesnt look heavy enough. But overall nice.great job.

BrunoDestefani:

Very nice poses and timing. The lipsync is a bit off in some places and the staging would be better with him closer to the left of the frame

Scott Wright:

Very nice...hits a couple of the poses a little hard..perhaps one more fine tune pass will fix this.

Great work.

Richie:

should zoom the cam into mid body since the rest of the space isn't doing anything

Erik Westlund:

Nice performance. I particularly like the first and last poses. Good variety of hand gestures and poses. All seem natural and believable. Facial movement lacks a little energy here or there... such as on "the director" and "section" and on the last time he says "perfect". Staging is a little odd with character in center of frame while props are setup for a nice asymmetrical composition.

Maya K:

Nice foot move and genuine poses. Still feels a little too busy though...

Ken Rice:

nice - but lip sync lets things down a bit.

Mathias Takacs:

nice acting. lip sync needs a little work, but great animation!!

Richard Bannister:

Nice,

I'd rethink the staging though. He is very central and the left side of the screen is rather wasted.

prashant rawal:

like it...nice work

kimleow:

wow i like how it started off....the leg is great! nice fluid aniamtion

Thomas Grummt:

very good detail and facials. good contrast, nice secondary action. lipsync is off sometimes and needs works. unfortunately still some pops in the body animation.

Dave Bolton:

Great fluidity, this is nit picking but when he is finishing up saying music, I feel he snaps a little too stiff to the slouching pose on the table. Still feels a little stepped. But wow.

Louis Ng:

Something's off in the lip sync, like at 'section of my music', the mouth shape stays the same for 'section'.

i really like the pose when he leans on the table at the end. Oh, and the little finger is bent at strange 90 degrees at this pose. . .

Rob Wilson:

I lie whats going on in the face and overall the body stuff, but the hands look a little bit busy around the middle. the hands just kinda seem all over the place. on the "my music" when the hand goes down over the edge of the table doesnt pop but the motion looks a little fast, same with that same hand on "its perfect as it is" its blocked by the other arm and you cant really see what its doing but it just moves around a bit too much.

other than that this is looking really good. another pass of detailing and maybe pay attention to the hands and you are very close. good work!