Jr Prez:

nice one, I love when he fell

Ramesh Salimatt:

expression not seen much he should have more expression and acting

Dan Dulberger:

Animation was fine. The extra small pupil was disturbing though. We're supposed to feel sympathy for the character. It helps if he looks like ourselves rather then a zany characters.

BrunoDestefani:

Some good poses, and the timing is ok, but some of it is too forced

rushang:

good flow but the sitting position is odd.....

David Andrade:

Work on your anticipation and followthrough

Ezra Allen:

nice work not sure a bout that kneeling pose though

James C. Ditmer:

I like it, but he moves too linearly at times. He does not create pleasing arcs with his movements.

Matthew Chan:

Between frame 83-99, that right hand/arm seems to move pretty linearly. Great job on the fluid movements otherwise though!

Gabriel:

Your posing is very good, I like the final pose even if maybe he looks like overacting.

When he falls on the chair, the move look a bit unnatural a bit like a natural interpolation, it may be better if he doesn't take the sitting pose right away.

prashant rawal:

good! except for the flip and fall

Nico:

There were a lot of dead spots on the character throughout. Some moments where he just totally stops moving and in CG it makes the character look dead.

Paulo Clayton:

Acting is good but speech gets covered up by his drooping head around 68-103. Avoid obscuring the acting, especially when it's well executed.

Erik Westlund:

Nice turn and slump into seated pose. He last look is a little ambiguous. Its difficult to distinguish whether he is looking at his manuscript, or off into the distance.