Taran Matharu:

nice idea......lip sync is bit off, but the body language is nicely time :D

Romain Digonnet:

Nice animation.
The lipsinc needs some work though.
Also, at the last frame, it looks like he's looking at his gun and not the sheet of paper. Mayb the paper shouldn't be in the same direction as the gun.

Tim W:

Nice secondary action choices

Tommy:

looks really good. I like when he hold out the gun. The facial exprssion there is perfect,

Louis Jones:

haha, i really like this one a lot. the lip sync feels a little off at times; mostly during the line about the director tearing out a piece of his music. and the end pose seems to be lacking a little, especially when it follows such a great one with him aiming the gun. still, great job!

Steve C:

This is really nice. The overlap and drag on the hands is fantastic. Great posing, great timing. Overall great work. Only thing I would tweak is the timing on the expression change on 'but it's perfect as it is' it kind of just floats up to that pose. Awesome work.

eleazermunoz:

what with the gun?

Brad Bradbury:

Interesting addition of subtext to the dialog.

Taber Dunipace:

Why is the camera moving all over the place? I think your acting and staging is ok, but I didn't get a lot of the emotions clearly enough.

BrunoDestefani:

Nice poses and timing and good lipsync

Ramesh Salimatt:

i didnt understand what he want tell

Avner Engel:

Not too sure about the gun, a little bit overused. Nice animation though

Jason Par:

Good acting choices. I think you can hit "perfect" a bit harder.

Jarred de Beer:

Love the gun effort, the anticipation to what he's contemplating is great :)

Sylvain Bernard:

Nice, but don't think the gun idea helps int the performance.

Erik Westlund:

Wow. He's taking this a bit hard. I like that you are trying to setup a surprise but I think you over played this a little. Nice variety in poses and shapes. Has a little start/stop, start/stop quality to the movement. Mouth needs more contrast between narrow and wide shapes.

Sean Kendall:

Cool

Ian Johnston:

Love the surprise. Focusing his resentment into anger was a strong choice. I also like how you utilized the timing of the monologue with the aiming and the pose to pose. Overall good job!

Simeon Rowsell:

really really nice. hes always moving his eyes which adds so much life. he also looks really gutted at the start.

Luc Degardin:

Fun idea!! Just one thing: lipsynch seems odd sometimes

André Moreira Forni:

I know that one :) Rock on man !

Nico:

Overall I liked the motion and timing of the character, I just didnt' really "get it." I supposed I understand he is angry and is metaphorically taking aim at the director but I dunno, something didn't seem to work there for me. Good skills though.

Jason Smith:

When he points the gun it's awesome... nice job.

Thomas Grummt:

the gun thing seems strange to me, i don't understand your point. animation-wise you have nice snappy timing and clear poses. i think between #80 and 120 the moves are too fast/hard (head, body). lipsync seems a bit late. overall the animation looks quite natural.