sushant:

need to show the gestures and emotions to the public....!! as they gone missing in the "torn up section"

Jonathan Arnold:

Great overall. The nod he makes when he says "perfect" seems completely out of place to me.

Steve C:

Nice acting. There are a couple of tweaks. When he sits down the expression kind of pops all over the place (on 'I can't') just try and hit one really nice facial pose. Good stuff!

Lianna Scrimger:

why is his head gray?

peter wassink:

nice staging!

Ryan Lowe:

Don't need the cut.
You turned his back to us!

vince gorman:

nice readjustment in the chair

BrunoDestefani:

Good work, but the lipsync needs improvement. The OO shape at the end of "I can't..." is strange. And the repositioning on the chair during "rewrite" weakens the line

Alec Sinanoski:

nice effect on the chair :) even though its easy, i had never thought of it. Just started 3d a year ago, havent really done anything much involving.... a chair.

Erik Westlund:

I like the more intimate conclusion. Walking a character around in a scene needs to happen for a reason. You have him start, establish a problem, then sit and contemplate. Good. He doesn't need to walk around between the first and second phases of this sequence. Nice reversals.

Florent Perrin:

the walk part deserves far more work! but good for the rest of the shoot...

Senthilnathan D:

very nice....

Ian Johnston:

One thing I've seen most miss in the sound clip is the exasperated breaths the character works through. I this added a pinch of a post panic attack, that would heighten the energy!

Brian Brotherston:

nice all around.

Nico:

Seems a bit unfinished over all. Some nice poses, timing just looks like it could use a few passes, for instance: at "section of my music" that pose just seems like it's being rushed into somehow...

Jeff Kim:

from 110 - 122, the pelvis seems to freeze completely.

The acting choices feel very unique. Keep polishing this!