Brad Kinley:

Some of your gestures aren't accenting the dialogue.

Ryan Lowe:

Motion is believable! Sync is off in spots. Good gestures. Love the hand drag across the table. A lot of twins though.

Paul Robbins:

It would be nice if the hand gestures broke the silhouette of the body more and the gestures were a little unnatural.

Marco Palmieri:

needs some fine tuning. but good gestures.

Louis Ng:

A different camera angle would have given a better silhouette for a lot of the poses at the end. Nice work overall.

saurabh:

some archs and hits require.....

BrunoDestefani:

Very nice poses and timing. But the opening pose, with him close to the edge of the frame and looking to the left is weak. Nice work on the eyes

Thomas Grummt:

has very good moments, but poses and gestures are a bit cliché and need polish. eyes and eyebrows are a bit soft

Richard Clark:

Good. It seems like you didn't spend a lot of time working on the subtle motion of the body.

James C. Ditmer:

I really like the arm movement between 163 and 193 of the left arm.

Ismael Ontiveros:

Excellent!!, I suggest that you move the camera a little to the right, i mean the character more to the left side, Why? Because doing this you give a little more loneliness to the scene and in the same time, it looks more like a conversation. Aaaaand a little more close up!!

prashant rawal:

nice acting

Gill Frank:

like the ending when he says "I cant re write what is perfect" you got him dowting him self in that section. nice!

André Moreira Forni:

I like a lot some of the subtle movements you have.

jeff:

ok

Kristoffer Clark:

I like the animation, the arms and and head are done well... what catches my eye though is stiffness of the torso.

Erik Westlund:

Nice weight in the hands. Poses towards the end get a little too similar and symmetrical.