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Just A Boy Taking A Big Step

by Monika

Final Rating: 5.72. Finished 24 out of 57 entries.

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Animator: Monika

Description: Animated interpretation of the dialogue from "Run Totti Run" drawn in 2D.

Character designs based off the original short "Run Totti Run"

Background originally drawn by me of a back alley way.

Experience: I majored in animation for four years in college.

Time taken: 8 hours (12 for drawing the background/layout)

Comments:

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Renell Test:

You have strong lighting skills. The background really sets the mood for the scene. I would like to see this inbetweened and if there was another shot where the camera is pulled closer to the characters. Other than this, great job.

Polina Solomakhina:

Great animation in the beginning with it was finished ;( Also I would've made the lines stand out more or made the background opacity a bit lower since it's not colored it blends together a bit

Bethany Thompson:

Not fully finished, but what you did is great! Animation is really smooth. Especially the dog.

FranciscoRios:

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