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halloween hang out

by Richard Plata, June Competition Winner!

Final Rating: 7.87. Finished 1 out of 62 entries.

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Animator: Richard Plata

Description: A boy and his dog intend to go out with the next door girl to a fun night

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Mike Schanbacher:

Awesome...It would have been nice to see them both at the same time in one of the shots, right now they feel a little far away from each other for some reason. Also, some of the boy's hand gestures in the middle section are mostly twinned, would be good to separate the hand sameness a little, but I really liked your acting choices! The character designs are great, and the dog is cute too! Nice work!

Branden Blowey:

Really nice character animation with some nice touches (him patting the dog's head) and overlap. Shame it isn't colored or anything, but luckily it's still very clear. Nice work!

Samuel Bourland:

Some good motion and lip sync going on, but there's too many actions going on. Try for simpler acting. Shooting reference can help keep things paced.

MarutiYemul:

Master in 2d.. nice acing... and performance...dog ha.ha.. enjoying....

Ng Siau Chiang:

awesome!!

Farbian gasmin:

Poor dog:))))))

juan francisco leon:

the winner