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Trick or Treating with you

by Brian Martinez

Final Rating: 4.06. Finished 43 out of 62 entries.

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Animator: Brian Martinez

Description: Didn't really have to much time but I really want to be part of this month competition

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Dave Roddick:

Could use some work on the lip sync.

Tom Islava:

It's good but the lip-sync needs more refining. Also the head's movement in 205-212 isn't forceful enough for the back hair to fly that high.

Megan Menetrey:

I like the dramatic feel, but try putting the characters closer to the center (but not right in the center) of the camera because that's were our eyes tend to focus, so we can focus on both characters. Also work on the boy's eyes closing and lip syncing, because he creeped me out.

Vincent Henri Guillaume:

the camera shouldn't move

Anais Larocque:

This lipsync needs more love. I suggest you use a mirror when animating. :) The girls facial expressions are cute !

Joel Coleman:

Needs a lot of imporvement on the lip sync and face.
Especially 177-196.