Robert Allen:

You should fix your sound output

Megan Menetrey:

You should work on your shot planning. The first half looked pretty cool but after that I couldn't tell what was happening because Character 2 was standing still and not facing the camera.

Tom Islava:

Not only does the timing have no weight to it at all but I can tell that you were animating just pose-to-pose without the straight-ahead because every body part finishes their actions on the same frame. There should be difference in how some of the body parts are timed