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The cop and the outlaw

by David Ibarreta

Final Rating: 4.39. Finished 42 out of 80 entries.

333 views including the voting period.

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Animator: David Ibarreta

Description: A cop assures the cowboy that his code name isn't weird.

Experience: 6

Time taken: 2 days

Comments:

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juan francisco leon:

this is from a winner few months ago? it has that style

Brian W.:

I love the expressions. Don't hold back. Push the envelope more.

Lucky Brown:

Lipsync doesnt match the first guy acting, and lipsync overall can be improved

Ruben Uggla:

The mouth movements feel very awkward and some of the expressions on the characters, specifically in the beginning, do not really match that well with how the characters are acting.

Lea:

This feels... off. Like you wanted to practice mouth shapes and lipsync, but weren't really interested in making the scene feel natural. That said, the guy in the cowboy hat isn't too bad (acting wise) but the cop feels way too aggressive and wide-eyed.

Ben Hall:

because of your focus on the heads we don't get to see the movement of the whole body which would be much more energetic and interesting