Final Rating: 5.20. Finished 23 out of 80 entries.

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Animator: Florian Escuer

Description: Tom talks about his old partner

Experience: Gratuated

Time taken: 9 days in my spare time

Comments:

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Adrien Communier:

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Tiffany Chao:

I wasn't sure at first if I was hearing the dog's thoughts during the line "come on man, it's an outlaw name". Perhaps a more noticeable change in facial expression at the beginning of the line, or a close up shot of the dog? Otherwise I liked the animation where the man rubs the dog's head, they seem like good pals!

Aaron McGriff:

I like the idea. Cute!

Ben Hall:

the animation is slow and you could have alot more motion happening to keep it interesting

Lea:

I'm confused about the missing blocking here, seems like you polished the beginning and end but then forgot about the middle? I mean I'm sure you just ran out of time, but usually I expect a shot to have been fully blocked out before it gets taken into the spline and polish stage.

Ruben Uggla:

The animation is really well made but personally I think it was a misstake to have the second person offscreen. When I hear his voice, Im looking a bit around the screen to see who is talking. Still, pretty well animated.