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Birthday Party Audition

by Joel

Final Rating: 4.22. Finished 62 out of 131 entries.

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Animator: Joel

Description: Best friend auditions her friends birthday party entertainment.

Experience: several years

Time taken: 3 weeks part time

Comments:

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Alex Ang:

Some poses need some work like in the hands and fingers

Bobby Russell:

You can't beat the dragon

Christine Rannie:

I love the absurdity behind the idea on this one on what is being asked of the man.
I think the man's gestures need better timing in order to go along with what's being said. Also, the gesture where he brings his hands on top of each looks awkward as it doesn't last long enough and the motion into that position could be faster. I feel that character expressions could be pushed further to be more expressive.

Richard Adams:

Love the cake idea! :)