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Robot movie casting

by William

Final Rating: 3.50. Finished 83 out of 131 entries.

346 views including the voting period.

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Animator: William

Description: Jeff the robot wanna be a bollywood actor.

Experience: almost a year

Time taken: 2-3 days because of error

Comments:

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todd harry:

There is a lot of motion on both characters at all times. try to bring in some moving holds. Both characters feel like they are moving very quickly and emphasizing all parts of the dialogue. Think of moving holds as negative space, an art piece with no negative space is very hard to take in and understand, the same can be said about motion.

Ken Ackerman:

very terry gilliam

Jyrki Kanto:

Nice render! The camerawork is quite jumpy.

Nate:

Lighting and rending is amazing. The animation could use a lot of work though.

Sabrina Winkel:

Everything is ok except movement and lip sync

Szilard Hadobas:

Nice render doesn't help on the animation. Spend that time on the anim next time!