Final Rating: 3.40. Finished 88 out of 131 entries.

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Animator: RizRam

Description: there's a middle of conversation between a woman's like producer and flamboyan boy ( actor ). and the actor seems like refuse her suggest.

Experience: 6 months

Time taken: 3 days

Comments:

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Eli Orr:

Two key things will help improve your animations. The mouths need to be more expressive. Also, when your characters finished doing something like pulling her arm back @ frame 35, it was WAY too quick; consider slowing the action down so that it looks more natural.

Richard Adams:

Decent overall, just faces feel too stiff and wooden, Needs more expressiveness especially around the eyes, eyebrows, cheeks.